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The Watching Tanru: a lojban poetic form

Two line commentaries: the first line is a bridi without UI cmavo, describing reality. The second line is a commentary on this, as a tanru using only five selbri, and this tanru is "flat"; no be, be'o places. --xod

It might be better to insert sei between the two lines; otherwise, the second line becomes part of a 7-part tanru in the description that ends the first line.


An attempt (by Jordan DeLong e) to describe the form in lojban:

me la ctatanru

ni'o la ctatanru goi ko'a cu pemci se tamsmi .i lo pemci be setai

ko'a cu cusku pa jufra poi skicu tu'a da poi jetnu ku'o secau loi

cmavo be la'e zo .ui .ibabo cusku lo tanru selbri poi mu brivla cu

se vasru ke'a zi'e poi jufra catlu


mi ba'o finti le citno kampemci

sei cerni tatpi nalprane cinri nunfinti


de'a benji lo notci mi la jboste

sei cuntu mutce tatpi xo'a pismi hoa cabna


lu

le smaji nicte ca'o masno farvi

sei sipna claxu tcini rinka rigni

li'u

se finti la djorden. setai la ctatanru


lu

le stedu be mi cu spofu je blucri

sei cortu xlali cortu xlali cortu

li'u

se finti la djorden. setai la ctatanru